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1.       Hook: Have you ever think of how the livestock and poultry that we get meat and dairy from are being treated during their short lives? Can you imagine the working conditions of workers who work with those animals every day?

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3.    Claim or Call to Action: Livestock and poultry that are raised in the factory farms desire better environment and humane treatment, since the poor living condition and inhumane treatment of these animals would ultimately lead to the use of antibiotics and affect the health of the farm workers.

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1.    Main Point, Idea, or Issue: health impact of factory farm workers

2.    Supporting Information: The polluted air of factory farm would lead the workers to chronic respiratory diseases.

3.    Supporting Details or Data: The documented source from cdc.gov shows the emission of several chemicals that would affect human health.

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1.    Main Point, Idea, or Issue: Inhumane treatments of animals should be banded among the U.S.

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3.    Supporting Details or Data: According to smartvoter.org, California has passed a law that bans inhumane treatment to farmed animals which it requires farmers to provide larger spaces for animals to meet their base needs such as turning and stretching.

Works to be Cited:

"Proposition 2: Standards for Confining Farm Animals - California State Government." smartvoter.org. League of Women Voters of California Education Fund, 24 Jan. 2009. Web. 13 May 2014. <http://www.smartvoter.org/2008/11/04/ca/state/prop/2/>.

Hribar, Carrie. "Understanding Concentrated Animal Feeding Operations and Their Impact on Communities."cdc.gov. National Association of Local Boards of Health, n.d. Web. 15 May 2014. <http://www.cdc.gov/nceh/ehs/Docs/Understanding_CAFOs_NALBOH.pdf>.